Fantasy Novel Rewrite Competition Submission
Hello I have a lot of creative writing experience having written four books myself which are currently on sale on Amazon, one of which is a modern day fantasy. I personally love the fantasy genre having read Tolkien, David Eddings, Michael Moorcock and many others. I particularly like the epic fantasy which continues over a series of novels. Having rewritten the material provided you will notice the word count has almost doubled from its original, this is not because I have added anything new to the story, it is simply because of how I have added to the descriptive elements of the text during the rewrite. I did take the liberty of making one change in the story. Your Royal Guard soldiers were divided into Muds and Pillows. I changed Pillows to Silks, this was simply because I felt that Pillows did not convey the right imagery. Obviously that is your choice, but I thought it might be nice to have another option available. My rate would be $2/page that I write. I
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hodachallita
- cách đây 8 năm
Great work Johnevans69 !! Really great work ! Congratulations!!
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johnevans69
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Thank you very much :-)
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Audreyvr
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That is, indeed, a fine rewrite, John. No wonder Shafa chose your work. I am sure he will be pleased with your ongoing edits of his novel.
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Chủ cuộc thi - cách đây 8 năm
Greetings, thank you for your interest in my contest and honoring me by submitting your entry. I was wondering if it is possible that you post links to your books on Amazon so I can get acquainted better with your work. Regards, Shafa.
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Chủ cuộc thi - cách đây 8 năm
Excellent. Can you add me on Skype? Username is aurashafa
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johnevans69
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Ok - I've added you on skype, although to be honest I don't use them often. As for this "verification" on freelancer. That's not going to happen I'm afraid. I will deal with you personally and sign whatever NDA you feel is required but I am not comfortable putting any more of my personal details up on freelancer, I don't trust them. . If you still want to talk to me then please let me know on skype and I'll send you my e-mail address there.
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