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Hi, I hope you like this one, please feel free if you need make some changes or any suggestion, just tell me and I'll do it ASAP, thank you for your feedback

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  • BoomingBusiness
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    Hi Christian,
    Yes I think this one is a lot better. There are just a few things.
    You are missing the "&" before 'out of the box thinkers'
    The music needs to be changed to something more inspiring and if you could change the video for reaching more people. That clip is a little too busy.
    Thank you! :)

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    1. chrisfenix
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      Great, I'm working on it, thanks for your comments

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