We think this design is going in the right direction. A few remarks:
- could you turn the light below the ship more into a fireburst like from a rocket? (you can keep the orange colour though, fits nice with the rest)
- the debris at the bottom is a cool idea, but it looks a bit sloppy now. Could you maybe give it an outline or find some way to make it a bit more clear?
- please make some variations with the ship displayed in a few smaller sizes (maybe this way it also becomes more clear there's a planet in background)