Could we discuss your creative idea in more detail? This way, I can provide you more creative solution. Because most of the clients want the same solution as I have provided you earlier. So, kindly give me a chance to further proceed on your design for the next level.
Please check the 2 new designs. If you still don't like then could you please give me a basic idea for your ideal design. Whether you need 1 page design, parallax effects, flashy design etc. So, I can better provide you accordingly.