Excellent that seems a lot more clearer. For some reason this one is the most difficult... Never liked iPhones myself... I'm a Android person!!! ;) These changes and then we should be go to go!!!
- Lets go for the black background.
- Can the "i" of point be the other way round with the point at the top.
- Can Jersey not have the flag element within it. Just plain white.
- I like the circles around Jersey though. Can these be a little more like radio waves emanating from it. Showing that Jersey is the centre communicating with others (like yourself) outside the island. http://goo.gl/7lGbc These circles could go outside of the normal font size but become semi transparent the further out they are - if that doesn't tool too complex. If that doesn't work then something more simple.
- I like the arrows with the "of"
- Can the colours be: white, blue, orange, red in that order.