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Internet as an amenity

Please check our entry. We have also added a Dropbox link so that you can download the complete article. Kindly check and give us your feedback. Do let us know if you need any modifications in the article, we would be more than happy to help you. Our motto is to delight our clients, so you can request any changes in the article and we would deliver it custom-tailored to your needs!! Dropbox Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/01rh77f0rk50k80/Internet_as_an_amenity.docx?dl=0

Bài tham dự cuộc thi #7 cho Write an article about internet (wifi) as an amenity
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  • halo12
    halo12
    • cách đây 3 năm

    Thank you for your detailed feedback. We strive to continuously improve our clients experience in every aspect. We would request you to please give us one more day...We are working on the revised version...As discussed, we will make the required changes and resubmit the article .. Thank you for your patience and support!!

    • cách đây 3 năm
    1. halo12
      halo12
      • cách đây 3 năm

      We have submitted the revised article :-) .. Please check and give us your feedback. Thank you!

      • cách đây 3 năm
    2. halo12
      halo12
      • cách đây 3 năm

      Hello, we would request you to please check our revised article

      • cách đây 3 năm
  • vc15
    Chủ cuộc thi
    • cách đây 3 năm

    Good article! It definitely shows the benefits of wi-fi and how important it can be for the tenants. I think to make this article a winner, it just needs to be slightly tweaked so that it is more oriented towards property managers, since these are the clients we are looking to attract. You do a good job within the third paragraph, of targeting property manager's. Now we just need to get that aspect into the first few paragraphs so that PM's will be captivated and intrigued right off the bat. Great job so far, looking forward to seeing a revised version!

    • cách đây 3 năm