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Hello, I tried to make it more dynamic with different camera moves. I zoomed in in some parts to take the attraction of the audience. I think it is important for the clickbait. I'm looking forward to hear your feedback. I would like to improve it regarding to your comments. Thank you

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  • C5Admin
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    Sandra, we love what you did with the zooming and camera angle, and the music is good, but there are many basic issues with the video.

    No one has really submit a perfect video yet, so we are looking at the 3 and 4 star videos to see which can be improved to win:

    Some fixes:

    1. The background is not a good choice. We were hoping for a video background of an office with actual people, but if a still image is going to be used, it has to be good.

    2. "When getting a loan, or opening a credit card" has hand indicators, so needs graphics on screen.

    3. The blue drop down you used for "specialty agency can WREK" does not look good. Some other graphic representation is needed.

    4. Audio for the word "wreck" need to soften the word. The camera picked it up to loudly.

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    1. sandraumbra
      sandraumbra
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      Hello, thank you very much for all feedback. So important for me. I will definitely improve the video according to these details. Thank you

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  • C5Admin
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    5. "Applying for a job" "insurance" "bank deposits" etc... there is a better clip in the footage where she moves her hands up and down to allow the graphics to pop out on the screen. This clip was not a good choice. Also, those pop graphics needs to be better and less generic.

    There are some other very small changes that could be made, but those could be done after we select your video is the winner. But to raise above 3 stars, the fixes i have mentioned would need to be improved.

    Thanks for your work on this.

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  • sandraumbra
    sandraumbra
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    Hello, May I have your feedback please? I would like to improve it for a better result. Thank you.

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