Pitch
Hi! Here is my pitch. I don't think we're allowed to upload pdf files here, but I have a 5-page, 300dpi, pdf version of this. I hope you could take a look at it and consider using it. I am open to comments, suggestions, and criticisms, and will do my very best to improve my work. Thank you!
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macyr
- cách đây 9 năm
Okay, thank you! I'll work on it.
- cách đây 9 năm
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Chủ cuộc thi - cách đây 9 năm
4: I've uploaded a new thumbnail, could you please use this one instead? Also take a look at the example product page that I've now uploaded for inspiration. You should allign the specifications on the left and don't center them. It looks more organized. Symmetry is important.
5: Please allign everything to the left as well here. And remove the footer at the bottom (please contact us)
GENERAL FEEDBACK:
Please look again at www.greenpackservices.com and copy our fonts there. I like general outline of the brochure but it looks too 'playful' at this point. You can either copy our header fonts directly from the website or use some of your own that look more corporate.- cách đây 9 năm
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Chủ cuộc thi - cách đây 9 năm
Hi Maycr. Thanks for your pitch, looks good. Here's the feedback:
1: Front page - Please remove Food & Beverage Packaging Services from the logo. The front Page should also have a title 'Packaging Brochure'. I would place this above the GPS logo
2: Table of content: Please take a look at the new files uploaded. Also include the page numbers so I get a better idea what the final brochure looks like
3: Please refer to feedback that applies to all pages at the bottom of this msg- cách đây 9 năm
