documentary proposal letter

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  • Giải thưởng: $305
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  • Người chiến thắng: Faithzeal

Tóm tắt cuộc thi

I am writing to you to solicit your help for our Brunei Travel Documentary project set for filming in May of 2021.

Please allow me tell you a bit about myself. I reside in Canada. I am 100% Vietnamese. I love to eat carrot cakes and dance to Savage Love. I am a co owner with my husband and is the CEO of a Campground Resort. When I m not working I spend my time on various projects. I enjoy helping others, traveling and caring for the environment. I also have a dry sense of humour.

I have an ensemble of talented videographers from Brunei. Brunei was unknown to me until I read an article which led me to research the country extensively. It is a beautiful, peaceful and modern Islamic country and that is something I would like to capture. Ultimately, the goal of the video is highlighting Brunei in a way that entices viewers to visit.

Filming will occur over 2 weeks and shot in standard 4K, including captions and trailers which allows us to submit to Netflix.

I need help writing a proper production proposal. The goal of the proposal is to get an individual to be part of the production project. I have written out an outline of my thoughts now I need help to organize my thoughts and written down in such a way that would help me with my goal. I would also need help with designing a simple,clean, attractive letterhead.

It must be written in a professional production format.

I have uploaded 3 letters that wrote. It would make sense to read them in their correct corresponding order. I have also uploaded an example of what a production proposal suppose to look like.

the letters I are wrote are too personal and I need these changes

Hi Channie, would it be possible to make a few amendments to the letter?

1) Compress the 3 letters into 1 (The length of the 1 letter can still be long)

2) Explain the project in more detail. Explain the exact reasons for creating it, the goals you wish to achieve from creating it. Give them a reason to want to say yes. (Imagine someone who has absolutely no idea about what is going on)

3) Where possible keep to the professional side (Tone should be more business like, as if you are a production company. Rather than from the personal side)

4) In as much detail explain the exact role of Prince Mateen in the video and why the goals from earlier would benefit from him being in it.

5) Remove the emojis from the letter.

6) Change the letterhead, something simple but more film related (Just your name as a personal brand for a producer would be goo)

7) Compress as much of the letter as possible keeping is concise and to the point.

8) Title to address at all times “Your Royal Highness” capitalised

9) must indicate that I m working with a production company in Burnei AVAA CREATIVE

10) The proposal must have an overview, objective, his royal highness role in the production (you should be able to find this in my letter. if you are unclear message me)

11) One last adjusment, also add this into the proposal

Dear Jab Gym, (HRH owns Jab gym)

My Name is Channie Bui and I am writing to obtain permission for a video segment at your gym during May 2021.

I have done my due diligence and not only are you the lone boutique gym in Brunei, but your stated mission of “make an impact“ would harmonize well with the positive themes we are trying to convey. I am a fitness enthusiast and feel shooting material at your gym would improve the efficacy of our video.

Filming will occur over 2 weeks and shot in standard 4K, including captions and trailers which allows us to submit to Netflix.

I hope you consider my proposal and allow me and my team permission to film in your studio. Together we can make an impact and help welcome Brunei to the world.

If you give me a JAB, I am sure everything will WORK OUT... Lol ? Punny

Thank you
PLEASE DO NOT JUST COPY AND PASTE WHAT I WROTE.

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“Faith was great to work with. She demonstrated that she’s able to understand my needs and put them into writing! She’s able to articulate my thoughts and was a pleasure to work with. ”

Hình ảnh hồ sơ tieukhe, Canada.

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  • Faithzeal
    Faithzeal
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    your inbox*

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  • Faithzeal
    Faithzeal
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    Dear Chan, please check freelancer.com inbox. I have made all changes and have sent the document. Please let me know if you have any more changes

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  • sudhirmudholkar
    sudhirmudholkar
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    Dear CH, Check Entry #50 . Thanking you for your time.

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  • Faithzeal
    Faithzeal
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    Dear Chan, I'm very open to rewrite if you think up any more changes; addition or subtraction on the proposal; whether now or in future, till you are satisfied. Thanks.

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  • Faithzeal
    Faithzeal
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    Check #47 I have included everything in a much better form.

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  • pidom
    pidom
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    Mam, please check the entry #43 with the comments and information updated as per your feedback. kindly check and provide feedback.

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  • eaverine1
    eaverine1
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    Hi Channie, Could you review entry #41 which contains the necessary update to entry #31 .I would welcome any adjustments. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

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  • eaverine1
    eaverine1
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    Hi Channie, Could you please take your time to review entry #31 . I would welcome any corrections, suggestions and additions.

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  • JRowe89
    JRowe89
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    Hi Channie! I'm an American as well as a native English speaker, please check out my entry #36 . I took all the info you gave and condensed it into a logical way, explaining to HRH about your background, your interest in Brunei, the documentary goals and objectives, as well as how his involvement will help boost the tourist economy of the country. Let me know what you think about my work, and I would be happy to rewrite and submit another entry. The only thing I was unsure of was the gym section, is that something to be added at the end/

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  • Faithzeal
    Faithzeal
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    Sorry mam, I haven't submitted mine yet. I had to rewrite all over again. I needed it to be perfect as I want to get it right the first time and yes, I'll definitely include the benefits in the most convincing way. One thing is certain though, I will surely submit before the end date (just hope I'm not too late). Kudos to everyone else currently involved in the contest and those that will be before the end date.

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      hi Faith, i making one last update to the proposal letter. please also add this into the letter.

      Dear Jab Gym,

      My Name is Channie Bui and I am writing to obtain permission for a video segment at your gym during May 2021.

      I have done my due diligence and not only are you the lone boutique gym in Brunei, but your stated mission of “make an impact“ would harmonize well with the positive themes we are trying to convey. I am a fitness enthusiast and feel shooting material at your gym would improve the efficacy of our video.

      Filming will occur over 2 weeks and shot in standard 4K, including captions and trailers which allows us to submit to Netflix.

      I hope you consider my proposal and allow me and my team permission to film in your studio. Together we can make an impact and help welcome Brunei to the world.

      If you give me a JAB, I am sure everything will WORK OUT... Lol ? Punny

      Thank you

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    2. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      HRH owns JAB GYM

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  • pidom
    pidom
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    Hello CH, Please check my entry #33 , and please provide your feedback.

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      hi RS, your entry is coming along, although its missing some key points, please do back to the details that i wrote to add in the necessary information. thank you

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  • JRowe89
    JRowe89
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    Hey I'm currently working on this but want to give you some ideas. I think that your letters contain A LOT of information. Like...way too much. So I think I will condense that a lot.

    Also do you know anyone who has been to Brunei? Have you been there yourself? Are there any Brueneian foods that you look forward to trying?

    What specific national monuments do you want to see?

    All of this information would help in writing a better proposal.

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      yes, I like to try their national dish, their cakes, street food. I would like to see the biggest mosque and visit the palace. thank you

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  • JRowe89
    JRowe89
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    Are you a parent? For the section where you introduce yourself I think it would be helpful to include that information.

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      Hi Jonathan , thank you for your interest in the project. i feel that information is too personal

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  • eaverine1
    eaverine1
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    Hello Channie, Could you please confirm your name for me. I really need it at the moment for more professionalism as needed. Chan Rui or Chan Bui. Thanks.

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      Hi Mukhtar, its chan bui

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  • hamadktr008
    hamadktr008
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    i've added the required para in entry #30 . let me know is it ok or not

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  • Faithzeal
    Faithzeal
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    Still working on my entry and I'm sure several other freelancers are working on theirs too and will submit soon.

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      hi faith, please make sure to included HRH role. i like him to introduce bruneis national dish, also some of his favourite cakes. also walk through the canopy and end the day showing us his favourite spot to watch the sunset. it should also list clearly how doing this will help brunei.

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    2. Faithzeal
      Faithzeal
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      I will mam

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  • hamadktr008
    hamadktr008
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    Kindly check Entry #23 and let me know do you like it or not

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      hi Hamad, i left you a message. your entry is close but its missing HRH role and why it would benefit Brunei

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  • malkaranathunghe
    malkaranathunghe
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    Hello, I'm interested in this. Can you please send me the documents?

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      hi malka, thank you for your interest. please look at my job detail, i have updated my information and also uploaded documents. thank you

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    2. malkaranathunghe
      malkaranathunghe
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      Thank you. I'll submit my entry within the next two days.

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  • lisacollins734
    lisacollins734
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    Hello there. Could you send me the docs? I would like to submit a contender.

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      hi lisa, thank you for your interest. please look at my job detail, i have updated my information and also uploaded documents. thank you

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  • pidom
    pidom
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    Hello CH, Please send me the documents. I would like to submit a proposal letter.

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      hi rs, thank you for your interest. please look at my job detail, i have updated my information and also uploaded documents. thank you

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  • afrukhtah10
    afrukhtah10
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    Hi, you can send me the documents, I would love to write the proposal,

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      hi A, thank you for your interest. please look at my job detail, i have updated my information and also uploaded documents. thank you

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  • dinaismael
    dinaismael
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    Hello, Mrs. I would like to participate in this contest. can you send me a message so I can see your documents?

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      hi dina, thank you for your interest. please look at my job detail, i have updated my information and also uploaded documents. thank you

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  • mehmoodfaisal61
    mehmoodfaisal61
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    Dear Contest Holder,
    I have good writing skills. Kindly contact me via chat and share your thoughts so that I could provide you good work!

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      hi faisal, please look at my job details. i have uploaded and wrote the instructions. thank you

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  • Faithzeal
    Faithzeal
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    Dear Tieukhe, I'm still working on the proposal. I don't want to rush and make mistakes. Don't worry, I have read what's in your attachments. I know exactly what you need. However, I hope you're not urgently in need of it? I should submit in the next 24 hours.

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    1. tieukhe
      Chủ cuộc thi
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      yes in 24 hours is good ty faith

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  • hafsahkhan04
    hafsahkhan04
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    Hey, I hope you are doing well. I am from Muslim country. I have done Masters in Business Administration with Research Work along with various certifications and 8years of experience in this field. I have expertise in writing content, and articles (please review my profile for more info). I would provide you high-quality work. Please contact me to proceed further.

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  • Faithzeal
    Faithzeal
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    Hello Tieukhe, I've got something for you. Please check it out here =>> #7

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