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Take the train

Hi Here is my entry for the contest. Now let me explain what I did. So I actually simplified the chord progression in order to transform it into a more popish one. I also changed the groove from your original shuffle to a straight twist like pattern that in my opinion is more suitable for a song dedicated to this age group. therefore the vocal melody should be adjusted accordingly. So I did the intro, one A section and one B section for you to evaluate the quality of my work.However on the B section I added a train horn sound that will separate the first two lines. So you'll have "Take the Train to the East" - train horn, "Take the Train to the west" -train horn then the next line will be on that break with the same phrasing in your demo. If you'd like me to record a guiding vocal track to clarify it please just let me know. Ok so here is the link

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  • Yonei
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    Wow, that sounds amazing! Deserved winner definitely.

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    1. geluionescu
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      Thank you man!

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  • AndrewScottMusic
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    Well done Gelu.
    Before I listened, I read your comments, and it was very difficult for me to let go of the swing feel, but you have produced such a catchy presentation that I couldn't help liking it.
    And I agree, it is more appropriate for children with a straight rhythm.
    Let's see what other entries come up.
    Yours is the best so far.

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