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Your English is rather excellent! I did not need to change very much in the article, mainly I just re-arranged some words so that the sentences sounded more fluent in English. I did a couple of phrases here and there to further help explain the topic, for instance, I wrote "The amount of blood produced in menstruation also fluctuates". The word fluctuates is used very often in medical literature, and its definition means to vary from one end to the other, I hope my edits were of some service, and I wish you the best in your writing future!

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