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Hi sir. Please check this. I applied all your comments in my previous entry and this is what it looks like. but i did not make the whole wall color white i just widen the white part then scale the name and maintain the reddish color of the brick to make it pop. i also put urban apparel under the word couture. On the second image, i incorporate your suggestion "banksy ghetto 4 life". i think it's more beautiful and relevant to the theme than the other, the girl drawing a hopscotch. i also made the color of the "thug 4 life" silver. Please let me know if you have any suggestions. Hope you like it :)
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4. For the gas mask girl - make the above edits as well for the wall and font color. Maybe write FEMA survivor in the same pinkish red you decide on for the other image. Make FEMA in caps - Try leaving the top brick above the white red, and just carry the white the rest the way down.
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Awesome work! I like both these revisions a lot. Is the imagery you are using yours? Meaning, are you drawing these girls or do you take clip art and alter it? I am just curious how your process works. Would you be able to make her in other poses on future prints?
Suggestions:
1. Thug 4 Life - lets do that color in a vibrant color, like magenta or pinkish red. Can you float the letters a little more, meaning, so they are not in such a strait line. Kinda how Banksy floated them up then down gently. Trying to make it appear less rigid and symmetrical.
2. Still really would like to see a version with that white wall color filling the wall.
3. I really like that black font the way you used it on "Responsible"- could your write Kill Couture and Urban Apparel with it on the all white wall? I want to see how it looks.
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