This is certainly along the right lines. I think there needs to be more energy and youthfulness about the youth one? I think the 'Halstead' text on each needs some refining. I like the fact that the 't' is a crucifix and the 'd' is the music note, but I think the overall style needs reconsidering? Could the people images on both be more musical perhaps, as I don't think it's immediately obvious that we're dealing with a church choir?