I'm submitting a talk for an upcoming conference and need it be compelling and appealing. I've created a draft but am hoping someone can provide some awesomeness to it. The topic is on organisational culture so some (basic is fine) knowledge on this topic is preferred.
There are three sections which I would like reviewed:
1. talk summary (200 words)
2. learning outcomes (100 words)
3. mechanics (150 words)
As I mentioned, I have already had a go at the first cut of this so you'll be starting with something to help guide you.