I wrote a story about my life that has 5500 words. It has already been proofread and edited but I am not satisfied. Too often my sentences beginn with the word "I".
I decided to start a photography BA at an art college in Belgium that was supposed to last for three years. I became extremely passionate about photography, especially telling stories through reportages and I went out every single day to take photographs for my school assignments. Though after a year, I felt that a school wasn’t the right place to learn how to become a photographer.
I want it to sound more eloquent. And I need it by tomorrow.
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