Thanks for the quick reply, Samantha!
I'll attach the file some time tonight or early in the morning. To make it easier for both of us, you don't have to show me the changes you've done to the punctuation. As for the rest of the editing, whenever you replace or remove something, you just do it and mark the text as red, just so I know where your changes have taken effect. You don't have to leave my old text there.
As usual, the rest of your feedback and--if Providence allows it--your critique, are always welcomed.
This chapter will be around the same size as the previous chapters, do it should take you the same amount of time (2 hours). The only difference is that in this chapter, the Jester will enact a small play for the Prince--and since I know you're into Shakespeare and all (I checked out your blog and read your article on problem plays), I hope you'll tell me what you think, if it's fixable, or if we would rather do without them.
Talk to you soon!