Jan, its me again, Mark :-)
I've attached a DOC file that needs re-written. does NOT have to be SEO friendly at all just has to be re-written as most of it is PLR and I don't want it totally the same as it is. Also, make any changes/re-arranging you think is necessary to make it flow better.
the only section I don't need rewritten is the 1st section, "THE HISTORY OF THE MONEY AND THE MARKET"
Otherwise please pay close attention to details so that it all makes sense and flows well too.
Please let me know if this is acceptable.