I do not have the psd files but i would like the pdf file edited
here my thoughts:
- “EVERYTHING AROUNDUS” is in different style. Please compare the spelling with page 3 (screenshot website) => “Everything Aroundus”
- What do you thing about to change the “US” in “AROUNDUS” into “American” colours? This means use the stars and stripes if you want to say the “US” like “USa”.
- Maybe it´s necessary to explain the 350.000 english spoken people (with an asterisk); I think you mean the englisch spoken ones who are not German citizens. But does this know the one who is the recipient of the document?
- I would change “WIR KÖNNEN IHNEN HELFEN DIESE ZU ERREICHEN.“ into „WIR HELFEN IHNEN DIESE ZU ERREICHEN“. This is your key message. Not you „could“, you do so! ;-)
- I miss your name at the contact data
- The offer is until 31.05.2016?
What do you thing about to put an example in the presentation? Maybe the largest version (so that everyone want this)? So that everyone can see what he get…ah so it looks like on the webpage, so on a mobile device and so it looks like in the app…
And edit the word shutterstock from the page and make sure its all clear.
Also change the last page where the special offer is.. And make another design
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