I like what you did on the [url removed, login to view] design, and it has to many colors.
Can you break this image down into a gray scale or two color illustration? (halftone % of colors are fine)
Her getting over the bar (and her pole falling away) is what matters.
The background isn't important, if you can do something cool with it (clouds, grandstands... all the better).
Last request, please add "Team Talcott" in large print
Please don't accept if you can't do it in the next 24 hours for $30.