I currently have two scripts that need proofreading - both scripts are of a personal trainer, speaking to a client. One is a guy, and one is a girl, both talking to a person of an unknown gender.
I, unfortunately, am repeating a lot of lines and phrases over. Such phrases that are being repeated are: "I'll see you next time" and "Let's get started". I need someone to go through and to clean up the writing and make it less repetitious.
I need someone with a strong (fluent) understanding of the English language, and someone who preferably athletically inclined due to the subject matter. I'm not looking for a complete rewrite, but someone who can proofread and revise. Basically, a human thesaurus with an understanding of slang.
*You just finished your your 15th work out! How does it feel? Give yourself a pat on the back and stretch some muscles, and I'll see you next time.
*Congratulations on completing 20th workout! You. Are. Awesome. Go treat yourself, jump into a hot-tub, and I'll see you next time.
*You've just completed more workouts than there are hours in a day! Way to crush it! Go have some water, and I'll see you next time.
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I would love to proofread for you. I have taught school for more than 25 years and have proofread a lot! I'm just starting my proofreading career and would love to work with you! Thanks for your consideration!