Hello, I need a person who is great at English to help me critique my paper. I have already written the 9 pages and placed the MLA citations in the file. You will need to follow the instructions below.....
tell me your claim -- I don't see a strong one.
read this paper carefully -- there is a lot of extra chatter (wordiness) -- stay professional/academic in your discussion
this appears to be a 1st draft -- revise and resubmit it to me for my comments
i want to see clearly stated supports that connect back to an overall argument.
again, what is the claim?
that is all simple as cake..