Upload here the final draft of your 5-8 page paper in which you will recommend changes to the UF experience that will help future English 104 students transition to college-level reading or writing.
, I will be focusing more on writing in my essay as a chunk of both essays were on the focus of improving student's experiences with writing and I agree the emotional ties within writing as well as the process of feedback are important and often misunderstood or even done improperly that set back students from enjoying the creations of their minds. I will propose a more emotionally conscious way of teaching revision and a method of feedback that asks mindful questioning of thought processes and a way to incorporate positivity into "negative" feedback. My audience will be people who find themselves in a position where they are given the task to give feedback on someone's work or a writer looking for their experience to be acknowledged and written out in a way they couldn't describe before and are given a healthy push to change their own mindsets in the process of their journey as writers.
Cite three of these articles attached
Need. by 2 pm tmrw