I am looking for someone with sales copy skills to write a simple sales page that I can drop off to my companies competition. I would like the headline to read " Is your cleaning service Personalized or Commercialized?" This is the following info that I woulf like included in no specific order; Facts-To big companies, they are just a number, high turnover means someone new and unknown could be cleaning your house at any given time, with huge overhead and increasing expenses, they either have to pass these expeses on to you, or cut back on quality to get more from their employees. How do I know this?? Because I used to work for the largest claening company in town setting up new accounts and doing estimates. I know what you're paying, I know the quality you're getting, and I will show you that you can get better quality at a better [url removed, login to view] is why I started my own company because I saw a need for more personalized service. I operate alone and am very selective in who I clean. I will clean your home, not a different crew, every clean, every time. And to prove this, for a limited time, I will clean your home for FREE and let you decide whose service better meets your needs. So give your cleaning company(and checkbook) the week off and let me show you what you've been missing. Whats there to lose?...Nothing. Call me today at --------. P.S. If you are satisfied with your current service, great, I am glad to hear that. I am always here to answer any questions or concerns you might have. I also offer a $50 cash referral program as well. THIS IS THE INFO THAT I WOULD LIKE TO HAVE. WORDING CAN BE DIFFERENT AND IN ANY ORDER THAT WOULD BETTER SELL THIS PAGE. MY GOAL IS JUST TO GET THEM TO READ THIS TO THE END, I THINK IT WILL HELP MY CHANCES. I DO NOT HAVE EXPERIENCE IN SALES COPY AND NEED HELP PLEASE!!