See the attached banner. It's on my website. I like everything about the banner, EXCEPT the way the title (You Don't Look Young for your Age) looks.
I find it looks a bit "weak" - it does not "stand out". The banner as a whole is "noisy" and the title does not help.
I want somebody to redesign it. Submit me samples of what you would do OR Feel free to play with it on spec, and if I like the job you have done, I will choose you and pay you $15.